Second Passes:

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commencement
1p: A girl prepares for a rite of passage (part 1)
janitor
2p: A man in a hotel gets more than he bargained for (unfinished)

Rought Drafts:

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stoolie
9p: a lesson for an up and comming criminal
beach house
2p: A simple scene on the  beach
the Count
1p: a guy who's getting sick of his friends
thug
1p: a middle aged thug having a midlife crisis (unfinished)
janitor
2p: rought draft of above version


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Book1

Rought Drafts:

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ch1
4p: an opening espionage scene


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